Social media effects

In the ELT class we made an essay about social media in our lifes and how does affect it. Here is mine:

How many hours we have spent checking our Snapchat or Instagram?

 There 's no doubt that we re addicted to our phones . We spent too much time on our devices checking social mediA and it can really damage not only ourselves but also the relationships we have. When we go to a restaurant more than half of the people of all ages are on their phones. It s really sad to see that "conecction ".

 I ,unfortunatelly, am guilty of spending too much time checking my social media at inappropiate times, for example, in class, on a date, at a meeting with friends or when my mom is blowing candles on her birthday.

 The terrible thing is that is has become an obsession to check an app, close it, an re open it again a second after. And yes, there is no doubt that this affects relationships. Generally speaking this has become an addiction for most of us.

 In contrast with this , social media could be great if we learn when to put our phones down. For sure, taking a break from social media could give us time to interact with each other. It is difficult to think about the future if we dont stop this once and for all. It is social media the respon sable of lack of physical communication.

 To conclude, what we can do to stop this is going out, play outer games, reading books or just stop checking accounts so frecuently. We have to focus on things that are really important in life as family, friends and romantic relationships